a lil less darkness a lil more midevil :P

well my other post was a freakin awesome success at failing it seems but ive started writeing again lately and the darkness is gone for the most part so heres a new one i wrote yesterday i havent realy writen for a long time so the structure is the same but im tryin to move away from the rhymes

warriors fate

Curse your fate for it is thus,
you shall be blinded by bloodlust,
torn asunder by my thrust,
and left to rot and turn to dust,
though it be your dieing day,
you mustnt cower nor run away,
for nothin but your beliefs you must stay,
and fight this battle that will not go your way.

by micheal brown


anyways lookin forward to some comments on this please let me know what you all think should i throw out my notebook and stick to my video games or what be honest i can take it


"Ignorance is the curse of God; knowledge is the wing wherewith we fly to heaven."
William Shakespeare