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edgar dernhelm

edgar dernhelm


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PostSubject: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeTue Oct 27, 2009 5:32 pm

opened the door steped into the world
and around me the cold wind swirled
from the darkness i began to shrink
into a corner trying to think
in my silence i began to see
more than darkness surounding me
for in all things there is some good
even if not understood
so here i stand seeing darkness still
with hints of light i would reveal.


michael brown

if you like it pls let me know ill post more Smile


"this above all else,to thine own self be true"(william shakespeare)
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PostSubject: Re: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeWed Oct 28, 2009 8:09 am

well i got some views but no replys Sad but i wont let that stop me so heres another of my quick darkies Razz


darkness abound with evill all around
i try to speak but cant make a sound
i search for friends but none can be found
i find that to my lonelyness i am bound
by chains of hate and fear no one will come near
so i sit alone here in my chair with music ablair
with no thoughts i blankly stare into the darkness thats still there.


by Michael Brown

The fool doth think he is wise, but the wise man knows himself to be a fool.
~ William Shakespeare
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Demie Zephyra

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PostSubject: Re: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 5:19 am

How distressing.


You know...
I wonder what you'd write if you didn't have a rhyme scheme?

=o Always something I wonder about writers.
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edgar dernhelm

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PostSubject: Re: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 3:33 pm

u know when i write it useualy just flows like that guess i rhyme naturaly in my head Razz so i have no idea what id write otherwise Razz ill give it a try sometime Smile oh and heres another poem it probibly has the least rhymes of all my stuff Razz

lead me into darkness,
hide the light from my eyes,
give me no awnsers,
tell me no lies,
give me no whose no whats no whys,
no excuses no remorse,
lead down whatever course,
id follow you till the end of time,
with you by my side id walk through life blind.


by Michael Brown

anyways thats one of my favs outa all my stuff Smile hope you all like it



Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once.
william shakespeare
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PostSubject: Re: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 3:34 am

I like that one. =]

It's emotional. I could picture it in a song, actually.
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PostSubject: Re: some of my dark poetry :P   some of my dark poetry :P I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 01, 2009 5:13 pm

well thank you very much demie glad at least one person finds my poetry enjoyable Smile so heres another one hope you enjoy it as well Smile



a mess my mind
a waiver just signed
easiely decived for my love is blind
forfiting my life and leaving it behind
forgeting my past my future i seek
the outcome no better for be the world so bleek
its apearence sleek hideing the plight of the weak
watching fall those unable to stay on there feet
i feel beaten down and admit my defeat
so i stand alone out in the street
fall to my knees and begin to weep.



by Michael Brown


They do not love that do not show their love.
William Shakespeare
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